You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter: • Say how you heard about the plan • Explain how you feel about it • Ask for more information about it

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a resident of Los Andes and I am writing

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letter to express my concern about the ongoing project of building a shopping

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in my

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Sunday I had a meeting with some engineers that are friends of mine and I was told that a huge shopping

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is going to be built within the

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year three streets away from my house.

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, when I got the news I could not believe that

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astonishing project is going to take place in our city. Since I have been an active member of our community during the

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five years, I would like to be posted about all the infrastructure modifications that are going to be done in order to satisfy the shopping

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requirements. For

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reason, I would appreciate it if you frequently send me information about all the construction stages in order to help

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part of the social job needed with our community. I look forward to receiving your response. Kind regards, Darwin Diaz

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

178 words

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