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With the vast increase in online resources today, libraries with print books are not a necessity for today’s society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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Public
libraries
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 play an important
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 in the country's culture because they contain an easy and free source of information in all fields.
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, Nowadays Computerized based resources play an increasingly important
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 in our life and some population thinks that
libraries
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 will lose their
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.
This
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 essay will express that
libraries
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 have significant benefits that should be considered and some supporting examples. Despite online research and information facilitating our life in many aspects and playing an important
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 in our life, each county should have a library that presents its entity and culture. Another factor to take into consideration is public
libraries
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 should not only be considered as a source of information but
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 provide employment to many people working to serve the readers,
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 going to public
libraries
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 for kids is a type of entertainment and there are many activities to them there, some
libraries
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also
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 have cinemas, shows, and events that help in countries income.

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