You live in an area where some sport facilities are needed for people your age. Write a letter to local authorities. In your letter Mention the existing facilities Ask for more facilities to be built Explain how these facilities will be useful for people your age

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letter to request some additional sports facilities in the locality of Kolathur specifically for the younger generation people. As you are aware, Kolathur is one of the posh areas in our city. Having said that, there are only a few sporting spots available at present.

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includes a public swimming pool which is situated in Rani Park along with a small area for a basketball stadium. Due to the increased population of young aged people in my area, our community requires a few additional play areas for outdoor sports activities. In specific, we are in need of a cricket stadium as we have humongous cricket lovers who love to play the same.

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, renovating the indoor stadium which is currently used for table tennis, carrom board, and other activities, would be a great aid. The aforementioned new facilities would be beneficial for all the youths in my residential area since we are spending most of our active hours on social media sites and other computer games. Over and above, it would be supportive for maintaining a balanced diet rather than leading a sedentary lifestyle. Thanks for your consideration in advance. Yours faithfully, Monika B

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You live in an area where some sport facilities are needed for people your age. Write a letter to local authorities. In your letter Mention the existing facilities Ask for more facilities to be built Explain how these facilities will be useful for people your age

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