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I have the pleasure to write a letter of recommendation for

Novita

Sari to you. She was a student at the Departement of Accounting, Kwik Kian Gie School of Business (previously known as Institut Bisnis dan Informatika Indonesia). During my interactions with her in the classroom, I have observed that

Novita

very

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proactive and intelligent person as she often asked questions in a deeper way. I

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supervise her for

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Thesis with the title “Social Interpretation on Earnings Management”. She is very enthusiastic to study new things, proven when I challenge her to use

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method for her thesis, and with no hesitation, she accepted it. During mentoring, she is a strongly analytical-thinking person and

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better outcome. I have known her for being a passionate Lab Assistant that teaches Accounting both

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Basic and Intermediate

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for her junior students in

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along with her junior students and

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attentive while teaching Accounting. She does not hesitate to explain the lesson again if her junior needs her explanation again.

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Tunas Muda Cendekia scholarship in her

last

2 years of study and is known for being a good scholar. Her academic records show that

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has very good results and finished her study quicker (3.5 years) compared to the normal one (4 years). Based on these observations, I highly recommend that

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a Master’s Degree program. I believe she will perform satisfactorily and successfully task

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given to her. Should you require additional information, please contact me through phone or email and I will be very happy to provide it.

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