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I have the pleasure to write a letter of recommendation for

Novita

Sari to you. She was a student at the Departement of Accounting, Kwik Kian Gie School of Business (previously known as Institut Bisnis dan Informatika Indonesia). During my interactions with her in the classroom, I have observed that

Novita

very

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proactive and intelligent person as she often asked questions in a deeper way. I

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supervise her for

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Thesis with the title “Social Interpretation on Earnings Management”. She is very enthusiastic to study new things, proven when I challenge her to use

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method for her thesis, and with no hesitation, she accepted it. During mentoring, she is a strongly analytical-thinking person and

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better outcome. I have known her for being a passionate Lab Assistant that teaches Accounting both

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Basic and Intermediate

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for her junior students in

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semester until her final semester. Based on her junior’s testimony, I heard that she can easily

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along with her junior students and

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attentive while teaching Accounting. She does not hesitate to explain the lesson again if her junior needs her explanation again.

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Tunas Muda Cendekia scholarship in her

last

2 years of study and is known for being a good scholar. Her academic records show that

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has very good results and finished her study quicker (3.5 years) compared to the normal one (4 years). Based on these observations, I highly recommend that

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a Master’s Degree program. I believe she will perform satisfactorily and successfully task

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given to her. Should you require additional information, please contact me through phone or email and I will be very happy to provide it.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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Some psychologists say that doing absolutely nothing for a period of time each day is the key to decreasing stress in everyday life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

In many nations , only a minority of young people are willing to do unpaid community service . There are many arguments that shows many negative outcomes because of this problem and the best solution are in demand .

Today more people are overweight than ever before . What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic?

These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?