The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
All over the world, mobile
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become the biggest addiction in society. Voices are increasing against mobiles and they are pressing to ban dial in specific places like smoke-ban. I completely agree to prohibit mobiles in certain areas, Use synonyms
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as in public transports and hospitals. We will discuss Linking Words
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become a basic necessity for everyone irrespective of age limit. All of us are relying on the facilities Use synonyms
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as call, text, map, internet, so on... At one point public are overly using the technology and they live with it 24/7. We would have spotted a lot of people using their Linking Words
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on buses or trains, some of them speak very loudly that would disturb others and make them irritated. Use synonyms
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, I had been returning to my home after the night shift, in the early morning and many passengers were asleep and suddenly we all heard a loud noise of a man talking over the phone about some personal issues. Some of them told him to talk quietly but he did not care about others and he dragged the call for his entire journey of 20mins. The talk was unpleasant for all of us and it ruined our mornings. The public nuisance could have been stoppedLinking Words
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, the hospital is the place where mobiles necessary to share the update about the patients but it's doesn't need to be in the middle of the ward. Many folks have the habit of pick-up the calls without considering other situations. Linking Words
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, when my uncle was admitted to a hospital he had to share the room with other patients of four. While everyone sleeping due to medications a personal attender attended a dial call and went on giving updates. Updating others is necessary not it should not be where everyone is asleep. Due to lack of sleep, the medication did not work properly for my uncle so there is should stick a prohibition on Linking Words
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in the hospital.
To conclude, despite knowing the trouble people carelessly use mobile Use synonyms
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wherever they want. So I completely agree with banning mobile, we all take account of the presence and atmosphere to avoid public nuisance.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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