Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

The

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number of

people

believe

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that a

city

should give more attention to

protect

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protecting

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old

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the old

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building

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buildings

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.

However

, some

people

think a

city

should replace

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old

building

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buildings

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with modern styles. From my point of view, I extremely agree with the statement that an old

city

building should preserve by

people

and government. In the essay, the specific reason will be narrated and

then

give my own opinion on the matter. To being with, I strongly agree with a

city

should preserve old

buildings

. Because, the old historic

buildings

is

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a good source of knowledge for young

people

to study in the future and can integrate with modern style, and their design by using

old

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the old

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building as an inspiration.

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, in

Chiang

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Mai province of Thailand. There have lots of old temple

buildings

and the government renovated

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them by

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by

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to

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integrate

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with modern style

then

old

building

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buildings

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and modern

building

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buildings

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can be together. According to, by avoid destroy the old historic places.

Additionally

, Culture can be represented through

old

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the old

an old

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building

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buildings

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in the transferred

city

. It attracts a number of

tourist

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tourists

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from all over the world to learn about those

city

’s tradition and

culture

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cultures

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. Those

buildings

can be

outstanding

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tourist

attraction

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attractions

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to create a reputation for the country. Those

bringing

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many

benefit

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for a country.

For example

, stimulate the economy and conserve traditional culture and old

buildings

to survive for

new

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a new

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generation to study. In conclusion, I personally agree with

this

viewpoint because it seems to me that the advantages of everyone should preserve old

buildings

for

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survive

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with modern era outweigh the disadvantages.