You live in an area where some sport facilities are needed for people your age. Write a letter to local authorities. In your letter Mention the existing facilities Ask for more facilities to be built Explain how these facilities will be useful for people your age

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Dear Sir or Madam My name is Jay, and I am 21 years old. I have been renting in Clarke County for five years. I am writing to inform you that we need to build more sport places in our county.

However

, we already have two sports facilities running five days a week. They are not enough to keep up with the increasing number of youth. If we have our resources ready, I would kindly ask you to build two more recreational areas since there is no place for youth in the southern area of the county. I hope you will consider our situation favourably.

Although

youth, like me, enjoy the current game places, they are always congested with people.

In addition

, they are outdated so that new facilities will give us relief and more flexibility and accessibility. I appreciate your consideration in

this

matter. Best regards, Jay

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

148 words

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