Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Thank them for the photos and for the holiday Explain why you don't write earlier Invite them to como and stay with you.

Hi Kitty, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I'
m
writing
this
letter to let you know that I have received our photos yesterday.
Firstly
, thank you so much to send me the beautiful photos. It was amazing to spend time with your guys
although
it was a short trip. Never mind, I think that was good enough to be with together. I hope you don't mind, that I have not written to you early because I'
m
so busy at work. As you know I'
m
working in an enormous company and I need to work with many different countries backpackers, sometimes is it frustrating. I want to invite you and your boyfriends to come to Mildura for a holiday as you have never been to the countryside. Please come to enjoy our farming life, which I promise you will never feel regret because we have lots of fresh fruit and vegetable farm here so, I can bring your guys to the farms and pick oranges, lemons, table grapes and vegetables. Trust me is it full of adventures in
this
town. Well, please to
totry
Correct your spelling
to try
try
persuade John and bring him here even, just for a few days. I'
m
waiting for your good news. Bye for now. Best wishes June
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