In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that

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huge amount of

money

should

be spend

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to build new railway lines for

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faster train conditions by some sort of people, in some countries.

However

, others think

on the contrary

way and believe that it will be more beneficial to direct

this

money

to the existing public transports between the city.

This

essay will discuss both of these views and give my own opinion below as well. Regarding

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the

first

type of view, it is already known that

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nowadays all types of transport infrastructure has

incredibly

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enormous impact on the environment around the world. For

instances

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, the fossils that

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cars, busses and other transports,

resulting

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to the big damage of the environmental conditions

such

obstruction of the fresh air, drying out flowers, trees and so on.

Furthermore

,

this

damages not only effecting to the health of

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, but with rising the demand for transport, it is leading to have more traffic

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than ever.

On the other hand

, developing the existing transport system can

also

be extremely useful, if it compared to the time value and

money

expenses. Because contrasting new train lines demand huge attention, lots of amount

money

, extra staffs and of course time.

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, according to the United States report, building brand new lines

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them 2B$ and 3 years. To conclude, in my opinion in order to save our environment we ought to have

protect

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it and make

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environmentally friendly atmosphere and build as much as things related to work with energy.