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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extent is this a positive or a negative development? You should write at least 250 words.

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Some
people
 recently listen to
music
 for free. Individuals download many melodies and concerts with modern technologies via the internet, which do not charge them. It has some benefits and drawbacks that I shall discuss both views in
this
 essay. When it comes to advantages at
first
 most of the citizens around the world can use
this
 method
secondly
, it is more convenient for them to hear new songs of their favourite singers at home or workplace.If you watch YouTube
music
; you will see many
people
 worldwide who subscribe and care about a piece of
music
For instance
, Adel's theme is so prevalent in Iran.
Finally
,
people
 do not need the necessary pay for that. Studying
books
 through the internet is more important than
music
 because many students who can not afford
books
 use electronic
books
, and most of them are available for free. But when it comes to disadvantages,
people
 who are involved in
music
 production face a down economy, which discourages them from making new melodies. Nowadays, we hear about some kinds of
music
 which are viral on YouTube before an exhibition at the market that make producers annoyed. Sometimes the electronic articles were published on the internet without the author's permission that decreased the value of research done.
Additionally
, the value of art and science will be diminished if
people
 take that without any effort. In conclusion, copyrighted documents
such
 as
books
 or songs increase the popularity of them which
people
 give that,
however
, in a long time will come up with financial problems for producers and citizens do not care for precious of that.
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