Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

Experts believe that there is an advantage of
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of learning a foreign
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beginning has more advantages in any kind of learning curve.  
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, primary
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exploring the real world. They can be easily
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an additional
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. French, Spanish & german are some of the commonly taught additional languages in schools.   One other advantage is that
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need additional and individual attention due to the fact that
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children
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are not born with social skills.
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might delay the learning process of an additional
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learning
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has more important advantages than its disadvantages.
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life is more fun and exciting,
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likely to grasp an additional  rather than starting in secondary
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learning an additional
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therefore
it clearly outweigh its disadvantages
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cognitive development
  • Enhance
  • Problem-solving skills
  • Pronunciation
  • Mimic
  • Native-like accent
  • Cultural awareness
  • Sensitivity
  • Exposure
  • Resource allocation
  • Qualified
  • Effective instruction
  • Overwhelmed
  • Curriculum
  • Undermining
  • Mother tongue
  • Prioritizing
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