Tests and examinations are a central feature of school systems in many countries. Do you think the educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Tests and examinations are a central feature of school systems in many countries and
this
will lead to many problems
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the
students
and to their families as well. In
this
essay, I am going to discuss the disadvantages of testing outweigh in the education system.
Firstly
, it is widely believed that tests are mandatory for the children for their right evaluation of the studies. But there are many schools who create their own mini exams at
class
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level and due to
this
it becomes outweigh for many of the
students
.
For instance
, if there is a student who's studying in higher secondary class
then
, before
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exam he should have to give
mini tests
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,
half yearly
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exam
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, and
then
again test
afterthat
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after that
he becomes eligible for the main exam.
Secondly
, these exams will create competition among
students
and
then
children start to
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loose
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their friendship and
also
good habits which is not good for them.
Furthermore
, for
this
reactances kids join
tution
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tuition
classes on extra charges apart from school fees and
this
excess charges create
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on many parents.
Thirdly
, most people hold firmly to the belief that at the time of examinations offsprings are taking stress continuously and
this
will
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the concentration power in the child and
also
this
is not good for physical health.
For instance
,
students
who are studying at night
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suffer from
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the dark
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and digestive problems.
Moreover
, because of more tension many of the
child
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also
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depression
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. In conclusion,
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of examinations on
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is not good neither for their mental health nor for physical health. Only main exams have to be conducted by the schools
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so that children
also
take time for their enjoyment and
also
learn something from nature. If a student
leave
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his book
then
only he can understand and observe
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nature.
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