Today more and more tourists are visitin places where conditions are difficult , such as sahara desertor the Antartica. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the tourists who visit such places.

Nowadays visiting tough conditional places

such

desserts or glaciers which located in Antarctica are becoming extremely popular by travellers.

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, journeys have

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both advantageous and disadvantageous sides.

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to prove arguments.

To begin

with, some sort of

people

are used to

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bored really fast. Because

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feature is connected deeply with their characters that might

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from their origin and upbringing methods of their parents. So,

such

kind of group of

people

always

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to do incredibly challenging things to get energy, joy and meaning as well of their lives.

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: as mentioned above, one type of their source of happiness could be taken from visiting places that have got heavy conditions to visit through.

As a result

, coming across difficulties

such

falling from ices or gaining to escape from

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polar

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which live in Antarctica, feeling challenges and winning them are their primary goals to take pleasure.

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, these challenges have

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big contrary side too.

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it can be taken some pleasure from them, they can bring huge danger to that group of

people

. For

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, having tours to Antarctica means that it

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that

people

are willing to be met straight away with polars in their wild conditions and it means that

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, being near the death with killing by them or to roll from icebergs and stopping their heart. To sum up, visiting places that have difficult conditions, have both good and bad sides. The

advantageous

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side

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people

can take

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amount of energy and relax

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world which has beautiful nature or with finishing their lives.