Many people today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the possible solutions?

Nowadays, the majority are concerned about their safety in their own space whether

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essay will examine the main causes of unsafe environment and possible measures, which can be taken to tackle

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situation. The two main causes of uncertainty are a surge in criminal activities by unemployed people and domestic violence. When there is an increase in the unemployment rate, they start to find an alternative way to overcome poverty.

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illegal drugs and

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commit murder

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severe mental illnesses

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as depression

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caused by joblessness.

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, domestic abuse is a major contributor

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at risk at home.

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, a child witnessing assault can lead to behaviour changes

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as always being anxious and feeling

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at home. Some possible solutions to

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problem are providing more jobs and

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the offender. As the government provides more job opportunities,

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will likely decrease unemployment

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the crime rate.

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, providing a much safer place for their mental health

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well-being.

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, the next step in fighting uncertainty is

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the offender with more severe punishment. In the case of a child witnessing domestic violence, it can become grounds for taking a child from their family under failure to protect laws.

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, the increase in criminal activities by unemployment and domestic violence leads to safety issues within a person.

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, we can significantly lessen the feeling of unease by providing more job opportunities and a law that

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the offenders.