You have been assigned to give a networking presentation with your colleague from a different office, who you met last year. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter: • Inform your colleague that you will be working together. • Provide your initial ideas on the networking presentation. • Ask for a time to meet and practice the presentation.

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Dear Mr Rahman, I am writing

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missive to let you know that I am from Marketing department and my employee id is 1290.My letter is regarding the networking presentation which has been allotted to us by the company and I am glad to know that the office had put us together in the same group. I hope you have gone through the instructions for our upcoming project.

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of all,We need to gather all the vital information regarding our task.Apart from it,we should keep ourselves vacant for one hour after office time as we need to practice a lot to give our best.In the end,we will distribute the topics according to our convenience,which will reduce the burden on a particular person shoulder. Please suggest some timings,so that we can cope up with the activities that have been assigned to us.I would be free on weekend

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we can practice during weekdays but I will be available only on alternative days starting from Monday.If possible let's tomorrow for

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discussions. I hope to hear from you soon Yours sincerely, Haman

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

180 words

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