Nowadays the most important task is the environmental protection of our planet for future generations. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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contemporary era, human activities are resulting in a harmful impact on our surrounding environment.
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, the protection of the environment is one of the most important challenges in front of mankind so that future generations can live
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. I totally agree with the aforesaid notion. The essay will elaborate on the same in the upcoming paragraphs.
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, increasing air pollution nowadays is an alarming issue causing health problems in children as well as adults.
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, the rise in the number of vehicles adds harmful gases to the atmosphere, which becomes a predominant cause of respiratory tract diseases in living beings.
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to that, cutting of forests made air quality so poor that the yearly seasons are disturbed. Resultantly, many areas suffer from draughts as well as abnormal rainfalls.
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, in 'New Delhi', the capital city of India, there was acid rain
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year because of the devastating air pollution, that made thousands of individuals sick.
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, a balanced ecosystem is a prime necessity to ensure a healthy
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for future generations. As industrialization is growing tremendously, the episodes of industrial wastes thrown in the ocean have been increased.
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results in a threat to marine
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and eventually to the ecosystem. To illustrate, in Mumbai, 6 months back, seawater contamination by factory oil caused the mass killing of fishes, tortoises and other sea animals. In conclusion, a healthy environment is a key to having a balanced and contented
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not only for us but
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for our generations.
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, in my opinion, the preservation of our planet from hazardous activities is the prime task to be acknowledged.
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  • well-being
  • prosperity
  • detrimental
  • sustainable
  • encompasses
  • combating
  • preserving
  • reducing
  • pollution
  • sustaining
  • counterpoint
  • pressing
  • interconnectedness
  • technological advancements
  • innovations
  • renewable energy
  • waste management
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