You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

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Dear Mr Ali, I am writing

this

letter to you to introduce myself. My name is Jay Dave, and I am a university student at the University of Georgia. I moved to apartment B10 yesterday.

Friday, is going to be my birthday, so I and my friends were planning to celebrate it in my new apartment at 10 P.M, but we are worried that the noise may disturb you and your family members. We will play music and sing some songs. We do not want to disturb your peace. That's why I decided to share my thoughts with you. If you haven't any problem with our party, I would kindly ask you and all your family to join us. You are all more than welcome to come if you have time, but please, let me know at least one day ahead of the party so that I can arrange for the numbers. I can't wait to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Jay Dave

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

164 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

housewarming
neighbourhood
settle in
concern
apologize
disturbance
kindly
considerate
join
gathering
introduce
socialize
appreciate
understanding

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