Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think effective.

In a lot of countries around the world, an increasing number of crimes are being committed by young people. The causes of

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appear to be focused on the three areas and some solutions

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emerge in the below paragraphs. One of the main causes of youth

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is a negative family environment. . These children who grew up in violent homes are said to have never received any love and support so they are likely

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violently.

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, if

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parents are always working, a young person might shoplift and even hope they get caught so that

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parents will be forced to give them some attention. Another cause is poverty, which

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seemed

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to be the principal cause of

crime

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. People cannot survive without food,

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, in some areas, the poor do not have sufficient money to buy food

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or other

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necessaries

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factor is

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violence

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from

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. There are many

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and teleplays including

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, which provides individuals

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influences. Especially, teenagers are

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to be affected and tend to imitate, so the

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rate of the young has raised annually. Turning the possible solutions, an obvious step would be to organize

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program and

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care program. If we took

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step it would

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effect on their family. A

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remedy might be for poverty, it has to narrow the gap between the poor and rich,

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, the government should tax more from the rich and relieve the poor.

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for social

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, television and film rating

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need to be strictly implemented.

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, parents should supervise their children and restrict

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time of watching TV. To conclude, negative family environment, poverty and TV

violence

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are

main

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reasons

of

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crime

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. A coordinated response from

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family environment may lessen the severity solution.