Some people feel that public money should not be spent on cultural amenities such as museums, theatres and art festivals. How important do you think these things are to society as a whole? Are there any areas which are more important for the government to fund?

It is considered to be not useful thing if public funds are allocated
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cultural sites and
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should allocate
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funds to public service, which betterment of other sectors.
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of cultural values and
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other ideal areas that deserve public attention. Admittedly, it is correct that museums or art galleries are important
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In our social life that never fails to give us a strong sense of cultural identity. It seems museums do service to society by educating and creating an awareness about achievements and art is an expression of human creativity.
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have taught audiences partly historical events. Without these means of communication, maybe
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will lose culture’s valuable industry. Foremost among these other challenges appears to be the question of education and tuition costs subsidizing.
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impact on society at the bottom line. Schools,
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as the benefit cannot be seen immediately because education
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to solving key social problems. Another challenge
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is environmental pollution (
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decreasing
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biodiversity. Governments should financially support initiatives that turn our lifestyles
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sustainable ways. In
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, art and cultural places
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should be seen as one among a range of issues to be solved, and investments in education and environment
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should be much more important.
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