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In many countries people do not recycle waste material.what are reasons for this ? What could be done to solve this problem.

#countries #people #waste
Recently, an environmentally issue of
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 waste material has been raised widely . In
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easy
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 I would discuss the factors of it and a solution of
this
 problem.
Firstly
 , I believe that lack of know and less source of recycling material is
huge
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 factor in poor
countries
 that most of
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 in
un developed
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countries
 do not have knowledge that how that can recycle the waste and how many advantages of it .
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also
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of
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becauseof
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because of
 poverty.
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 in most
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rich
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countries
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 people are busy and they ignored it . They think that
this
 is the responsibility of the government not there .I think
this
 is the biggest reason in developed
countries
 why they not showing interest in recycling. In
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number of
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this
 issue like developed
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poor
countries
with
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financially and
also
 with
latest
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 technology of recycling .
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goverment
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government
 of the rich
countries
 make
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 for
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not
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 and give
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 knowledge of
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 aspects of recycling in schools so children can take part .
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 the end .The earth is only our home .Everyone must take
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responsibility
of
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 recycling so that we can keep our environment clean and healthy.
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