Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things .Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion .

Advertising plays a vital role in marketing things and is obviously considered as the prime factor when we launch a
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argue that it is the most reliable way for attracting a consumer while others think that nowadays commercials become a part of the marketing and no one gives much seriousness to that. In
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I would like to analyze both
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aspects and will come up with a conclusion.
Firstly
,advertisement is the best way through which a
product
can easily get into peoples minds.It gives the best description and the benefits of the products through pictures, short movies which help to convince the public easily .Another trick is using the celebrities in the commercials,they are considered as the role model for many youngsters and which in turn help to get the youth as consumers.
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when we talk about Lux a soap for which famous Bollywood actress Aishwarya Rai acted and whenever we talk about that brand or when we buy it Aishwarya's picture is coming up.
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,these promotion movies are more common nowadays and the community give the least preference to that as well.For ,instance when we saw a youtube video there are commercials coming up before the content crowd are very eager to skip that or not give much attention to the short video which obviously shows our less interest in that.As technology advances society started looking for the review of the products from the online platforms before buying them rather than depending on the advertisements.
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to conclude there was a time when advertisements are the major heroes for buying the products and now it is replaced with reviews for the
product
from the online media.So In my ,
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we should know how others feel about the
product
when they use it rather than giving importance to the fake testimonials.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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