You borrowed an important textbook from a classmate last term. You now realize your classmate has returned home overseas and you still have a book. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter -apologise for the mistake -find out how important the book is to him/her -say what you will do

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Dear John Hello, hope you are doing well. Writing

this

piece of paper to apologise for not returning the

book

‘Advanced Learning in C++’ that I borrowed from you during the

last

term.

Last

night, I found that

book

in my cupboard while I was making it and realized that I forgot to return it ,

although

, I promised to return it within a few days earlier. I am grateful to you for lending me

this

book

just prior to the final term as it was a great help, but, I deeply regret not returning it on time. I am not quite sure whether

this

book

is still indispensable to you or not. As far as I am concerned, you were planning to do masters in Computer Science and Application from one of the reputed universities in your country. So, please let me know if

this

book

is going to help you in cracking the entrance exam. Based on your response. I might courier it or send it through the post.

Besides

this

, as you are aware, Dino is visiting your hometown

month so if you can wait, I will send the

book

along with him. Wish you success and look forward to hearing from you soon. With Love Laura

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

211 words

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You borrowed an important textbook from a classmate last term. You now realize your classmate has returned home overseas and you still have a book. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter -apologise for the mistake -find out how important the book is to him/her -say what you will do

The Closing

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