You have been assigned to give a networking presentation with your colleague from a different office, who you met last year. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter: • Inform your colleague that you will be working together. • Provide your initial ideas on the networking presentation. • Ask for a time to meet and practice the presentation.

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Dear Mr Rossi, My name is Zannatul Firdaus ,I am from the Marketing department and my employee ID is 1290.today, I am writing

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letter to inform you that we have both been selected for a networking

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by the company currently we are working. To embark with ,our company has decided that you and I will be made the best pair ,for the networking

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.I think it will be a great opportunity to show our hard work and talents to our employer ,for

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reason, I am writing

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letter to you as you

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, we have to decide when we will do our work and we should collect some essential information from different sources .

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, I think after office hours we can work for one hour extra for

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.It will be a golden opportunity for us to get a promotion.

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,you can advise some appropriate time for practising face to face .It will be very lucrative for our

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, please let me know when we can meet ,I believe that it will boost our confidence. I hope we will do our networking

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in a splendid way and it will bring success for us. With regards, Zannatul Firdaus

Zannatul Irin Wed Jan 19 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

207 words

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