Some people believe that having sport in schools is a waste of time and resources, whilst other people believe that sport in schools is a vital part of education. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The pie charts highlight the information with regard to the number of
users
of the five common social networks throughout the period from 2011 to 2013. Over the research, which was conducted in 2011, we can observe that Facebook is the most popular social media among society. A more detailed look at
this
pie chart affords to infer that approximately 60% of the Internet
users
register on
such
a social website.
Also
noteworthy is that the popularity of Facebook remained during the research period,
however
, the total of
users
of
this
network has been dwindling from 59% to 38%. The
second
and
third
popular channels are Twitter and LinkedIn.
Moreover
, their popularity had been increasing during the research period.
For instance
, figures on former and latter websites surged from 10% to 15% and from 21% to 25% respectively.
Likewise
, Google+ demonstrate significant growth in figures and the number of Pinterest
users
also
has incurred a surge. To summarise, it can be inferred that social media has been becoming an essential part of the modern lifestyle.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical fitness
  • Holistic development
  • Cognitive function
  • Teamwork
  • Interpersonal skills
  • Extracurricular
  • Academic achievement
  • Resource allocation
  • Curriculum
  • Inequality in opportunities
  • Life skills
  • Well-rounded education
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