Every year several languages die out some people think that it is important because life will be easier if there are few dialect .to what extent do you agree or disagree.

In today's world, various dialects are become extinct from time to time. Some people consider it as a significant process as if there are few
languages
, it will be easier to communicate between the population. Personally, I partly agree with
this
opinion. On the one hand, I agree. the reason to support my opinion is that
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definitely it brings communication to the easier step when speaking on few
languages
. I believe that proof of
this
opinion is why English is chosen as an International
language
. It provides to the simple conveying of messages that various nations have to tell each other.
For instance
, I have friends not only in Georgia
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but in Sweden and Denmark as well. In order to understand each
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we are talking in English as we are citizens of different countries and can not communicate in our native tongue.
On the other hand
, I disagree, because
firstly
, I strongly believe, that the nations, which have a unique history and
language
must struggle for their identity, and should take care of their inheritance.
Furthermore
, they should take strategic actions and make their mother tongue stronger than before.
For example
, Georgian is one of the fourteen unique
languages
. Georgians have essential
language
and script as well. They have to care more about it to protect themselves from the time that turns pale everything on its way. In order to protect their own
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people should put more effort into the education of future generations of their countries. In conclusion, I hope that the role of the international
language
will remain the same as before, while other unique and amazing
languages
will gain and retain their deserved place in the daily life and history of the world.
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