People rarely interact with their neighbours and this is harmful effect for local communities. What are the possible cause and solutions.

Nowadays
people
are becoming unsocialized and always busy with their carrier.
As a
result
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connecting to the
neighbours
are so much difficult for the lackings of time.
This
essay intends to analyse
this
situation and
also
follow some solutions to alleviate
this
problem
.
To begin
with, The
first
and foremost reason for
this
problem
is that the modern world keeps busy
people
at work.That's why sometimes the
community
doesn't know who lived
next
door.
Although
it happens much in the city rather than the village.City
people
lead a robotic life for livelihood.That's why it's really tough for them to cooperate with the
next
door.For that,suddenly if
people
face any
problem
they could not easily go the
neighbours
.
For instance
, ill old
people
whom maximum times lived alone in the home and their family members are busy with work.Though suddenly the old
people
feel illness
then
it's tough to him go the
neighbours
if they did not know them,
,
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Clearly the elder
people
fall a very big
problem
. Moving the
next
, Rarely interacting with the
neighbours
is another cause is that today's
people
are so much introverted and they do not easily contact with the
community
.Though it's not good for the
community
sometimes they feel good about that because the other
community
maybe
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not
interested
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to cope with them.But needs to keep a good relationship with the
next
door.It helps anytime and anything for.
For example
, a good relationship helps
people
with the
community
people
easily.sometimes the
community
wants to help the poor
people
together and
then
well relation
also
helps them to provide donations for helpless
people
. To sum up, all the
people
need to keep the good relationship and only the two-door can solve
this
problem
. To lead a good social life all
community
needs to interact with each other
people
.
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