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Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intellegence can be measured in other way. What’s your opinion?

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Many individuals guess that
success
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 is measured by intellect, while other
persons
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 support the view that there are other
ways
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 for measuring
intelligence
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. I support the point of view that
success
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 is not one way for measuring
intelligence
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, there are many various
ways
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 for measuring intellect,
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 as some personal characteristics, sufficient
skills
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 and On the one hand, individuals support the idea that
intelligence
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 is measured by
success
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. Admittedly, in modern worldwide society recognizes
the
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 successful
person
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 as an intellectual
person
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. It is observed that without a strong-minded
person
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 cannot achieve
success
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 in any performance.
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, a
person
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 without any professional business and financial
skills
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, which need some high-level education, cannot build a successful company.
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, any successful business, company or organization
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 on a high intellectual founder. In spite of the importance of
intelligence
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 for
success
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, achieving
success
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 needs not only
intelligence
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,
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 but
also
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 some personal characteristics
such
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 as self-confidence, sense of purpose, hard-working and leadership and professional
skills
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.
On the other hand
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, some individuals suppose that
intelligence
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 might be measured in other
ways
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. I clearly agree with
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 viewpoint clearly because not all high-intellectual
persons
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 are successful. İt is observed that a majority part of
persons
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 with high IQ suffers from loneliness, cannot build healthy relationships with other members of society, have some hardships with self-realization. An İntellectual
person
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 might make use of knowledge, but it is not enough for being a successful
person
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.
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, for achieving
success
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 intellectual
person
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 must have some human qualities
such
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 as leadership
skills
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, sense of purpose and strong character. İntellegence is not enough for achieving
success
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 in modern life. İn conclusion, in spite of the opposite minds of
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 question, I completely agree with the idea about identifying intellectual
persons
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 not only with
success
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 but
also
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 with other
ways
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such
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 as human quantities.
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