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With the recent improvement to internet , people can leave views or opinions on certain goods or services . They have purchased . Is it a good or a bad thing? Discuss both giving your own answer with examples.

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with the widespread use of the internet in society , at present people can leave their views or opinions on certain goods or
services
 by leaving a rating on them after they have used it,
this
 is a good
trend
 for people who consider market ratings and views before actually buying
product
 or
services
 from that particular company or agency. I am going to discuss in detail
this
 issue in
this
 essay considering the pros and cons of the
trend
. Recently with multidirectional use of the internet ,companies have developed loyalty departments that follow up with the
customers
 by contacting them by email or by social media with a set of questionnaires to know ,how much the customer is satisfied or unhappy with the
product
 or
services
 and with
customers
 permission these views are posted on company's website tagging the
product
 or
services
, which gives room for the company to improve the
product
 or
services
 and gain the confidence of more and more
customers
. A negative rating on the other ,
Add an article
the
a
show examples
hand will end up losing
customers
 and those
products
 will lose their market share until they come up with a quality improvement ,
therefore
 Some web-based marketing companies like-wish use
this
trend
 for approval and disapproval of the
product
 for marketing.
Products
 with more positive ratings will have more sales at the end of the day as a large number of people had used the
product
 and are satisfied with it. In , conclusion
this
 newer rating
trend
 makes the purchase of
products
 straightforward with positive ratings and ignorance of negative rated
products
 will save time and efforts for the right
product
, in ,short there will be a win-win for
customers
 and marketing departments.
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