Some people think that studying history is a waste of time while others think it is essential for us to learn history. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that studying
history
has nothing to do in
the future,I disagree.Change preposition
with
However
,others say that it is a
crucial for us to research and development on Change the article
apply
history
. In this
essay,I will discuss both sides and give necessary
opinion.
On the one hand,Correct article usage
the necessary
history
reveals Change preposition
to us
us
the past and helps to Correct pronoun usage
apply
take
decisions for the future generation. Correct your spelling
make
Firstly
,for youngsters
it gives different outputs on the agriculture and resources that have been used in cultivating the land. Add a comma
,youngsters
For example
,the ancient sumerians
in Change the capitalization
Sumerians
mesopotamia
around 3000 B.C. came with the rise of agricultural societies and property ownership and Change the capitalization
Mesopotamia
this
consists of largely of land,livestock such
as cattle and grain. This
helps and gives the
guidance for the younger generations and follow the techniques that Correct article usage
apply
has
been used by ancient people. Change the verb form
have
Secondly
,ancient civilizations has
Change the verb form
have
attributes
different cultures and origins of gods. To illustrate Change the verb form
attributed
this
,in the
Correct article usage
apply
chinese
mythology,the creation of writing attributes Change the capitalization
Chinese
the
sages and gods that are used for communication. Change preposition
to the
Moreover
,this
helps community
to learn how to worship gods and follow religious methods.
Add an article
the community
a community
Lastly
,there are great leaders and freedom fighters who fought for their countries. This
anticipates youth to participate in politics and follow the rules that are given by the governing bodies.Furthermore
,it has also
helped in globalisation ,rates of growth of population,knowledge and literacy programs and environmental degradation.
Nevertheless
,others opine that studying history
is the hard
Correct your spelling
hardships
ships
in learning because of the various dates and years ,ages and civilizations. They believe that other subjects Fix the agreement mistake
ship
such
as,
science and technology , business studies and communications are more Remove the comma
apply
knowledge based
for future employment opportunities. Add a hyphen
knowledge-based
However
,schools and parents are also
giving the
guidance Correct article usage
apply
and
encouraging their child's decision and avoiding Correct word choice
apply
to explain
the positives of taking Change the verb form
explaining
history
as a subject.
To conclude,although
history
has so many benefits public are avoiding because
of different perspectives. I believe Correct pronoun usage
it because
history
has more outcomes than drawbacks because of the
scientific reasons.Correct article usage
apply
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