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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write papers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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How much it was annoying to wait for the letters from your loved ones for months until they arrive? It is the perfect
time
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 to end
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 era. Technology helps people to build a
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 bridge between all countries where services are instant, efficient and
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-reducing,
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 I strongly believe that new ways of
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 are more effective than writing with pen and paper
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 because it is ecofriendly and productive.
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, recent methods of
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 provide the ability to manage
time
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 and increase the exchange between the plethora of communities. In fact, we can write a message to our foreign clients, our relatives, our employees and many more in just a few seconds. Nowadays,
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 and money are the most important elements for our lives,
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 as, in the business where international companies aim to use e-mails, social conferences, social advertisements etc. as a very powerful weapon in the market in order to develop their status in the society.
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, protecting the environment is the aim of the government and other organizations all over the globe. We all know that writing on paper will cost our nature many of its resources and raw materials
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 as wood, leaves and even animals some of the
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. A simple electronic mail will be sent using only a small amount of current
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 already supplying the machine like a mobile or computer. To conclude, it is crucial to use mordent
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 tools in order to reduce
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 and could be more productive.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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