You are working for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, you should: • describe why you want to take the course • explaining how it will be beneficial to company • tell who will be managing your work in your absence.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter in support of my decision. I have seen an advertisement for
training
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course
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Customer Service Skills, I believe
that is
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my role and the company. To start with, In
this
course
consists of communication
skill
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and problem-solving
skill
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.
This
course
will help me improve my
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when I have to communicate with our
client
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in face to face.
Furthermore
, it will encourage me to solve the facing problem in a pressure moment.
Then
, It will enhance my work and will have a positive effect on the image of the company. Regarding
this
, I would like you to issue an
identifical
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identical
work documents for enrolling
this
course
and
rescheudule
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reschedule
schedule
shift because it will start every Tuesday at 3 pm. It will take 8 weeks to finish it.
Lastly
, I hope you
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consider my decision and
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handle
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my documents. I look forward to your response. Yours faithfully, X
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