In many countries, prison is the most common solution to the problem of crime. However, another effective way is to provide people with a better education so that they cannot become criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The controversial topic concerning the best

solution

to the problem of

crime

never fails to attract public attention. In today's world, some nations think that prisoning

criminals

is the most popular

solution

while educating folks with a higher quality of

education

can prevent more people from becoming

criminals

in the future. In my opinion, I completely agree that better

education

could overcome the

crime

issue. Prison is the most popular

solution

to face crimes in many countries. Putting law offenders in jail provides the law offender with a

second

chance to rethink their wrong actions.

Furthermore

, prisoning

criminals

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been tried for

long

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time and proved

it's

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effectiveness over the course of 400 years.

In addition

, some countries do not have enough resources to apply alternative plans.

For example

, Egypt decided to stop punishing

criminals

by putting them in jail and

to send

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them to serve the community, but Egypt's plan failed because it will cost them too much and they do not have enough money to apply their plan.

Thus

, prison is common in many places in the world.

Education

is known for decreasing

crime

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in any nation. Because educating the community properly increases their chances to get good-paying jobs.

For instance

, nations that provide

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education

are less likely to counter a high level of

crime

.

Therefore

,

education

could be a practical

solution

to the

crime

problem.

Consequently

, I prefer

this

solution

. In conclusion,

although

prisoning

criminals

is so popular in some countries,

education

can be a good alternative and can solve the

crime

difficulty effectively.

This

essay discussed why I completely agree that

education

can deal with the

crime

difficulty effectively.

This

essay

also

gave a logical conclusion.