Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Prevention is better than cure; mankind can protect from illness by injecting vaccinations;
this
is the best way to stay
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away
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way
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from numerous
childhood
sickness
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sicknesses
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.
However
,
parents
should be injected
vaccination
by following the ministry rules to their toddler to fight common illness or
this
choice is made by individuals and they have a
right
to not immunize their infant. I think fathers and mothers should be made by law and legislate to immunize their little ones and
this
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. On the one hand,
vaccination
plays a crucial role in
humans
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life because
this
can only protect from
diseases
, especially in
childhood
sickness,
therefore
,
parents
should be injected vaccine for their infant,
thus
, numerous
diseases
reduce like chickenpox.
For example
, in western countries
parents
should adhere
their
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nations' law for
vaccination
in
childhood
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period,
thus
, polio
diseases
was
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eliminated when
vaccine
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was found.
In addition
, these kinds of deadly
diseases
should be prevented in
childhood
time by putting
vaccination
,
therefore
, children's immune
system
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systems
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can protect to
toddler
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toddlers
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.
On the other hand
,
this
kind of immunize
vaccination
can only choose by an individual rather than
strictly
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rules
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by the authority because some
persons
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do not like to inject
vaccine
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for their little ones when
theirs
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' ministry does forcefully.
For instance
, in the USA citizens have to pick
this
right
about
vaccination
rather than the authority because America is
the
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democratic nation,
therefore
, if they
need
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, they go to put immunization,
besides
they never do
this
by following laws.
Therefore
,
this
is an individual
right
toi
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to
choose
this
. To conclude,
vaccination
is the best idea to
preventing
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illness; countless
chidhood
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childhood
diseases
can be prevented by putting immunization,
hence
, many
parents
do
this
and adhere
rules
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.
Common
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person
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people
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have a
right
to pick
this
whether do or not.
However
, in my opinion, about
this
,
parents
should
be follow
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the law about
chilhood
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childhood
prevents
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vaccination
,
thus
, affecting the ratio reduces tremendously.
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