Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Prevention is better than cure; mankind can protect from illness by injecting vaccinations;
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is the best way to stay
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way
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from numerous
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sickness
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,
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should be injected
vaccination
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by following the ministry rules to their toddler to fight common illness or
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choice is made by individuals and they have a
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to not immunize their infant. I think fathers and mothers should be made by law and legislate to immunize their little ones and
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essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. On the one hand,
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plays a crucial role in
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life because
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can only protect from
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, especially in
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sickness,
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should be injected vaccine for their infant,
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, numerous
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reduce like chickenpox.
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, in western countries
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should adhere
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nations' law for
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in
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childhood
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period,
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, polio
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eliminated when
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was found.
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, these kinds of deadly
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should be prevented in
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time by putting
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,
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, children's immune
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systems
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can protect to
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,
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kind of immunize
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can only choose by an individual rather than
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rules
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by the authority because some
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do not like to inject
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for their little ones when
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' ministry does forcefully.
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, in the USA citizens have to pick
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right
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about
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rather than the authority because America is
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democratic nation,
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, if they
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, they go to put immunization,
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they never do
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by following laws.
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is an individual
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to
choose
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. To conclude,
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is the best idea to
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illness; countless
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childhood
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can be prevented by putting immunization,
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, many
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do
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and adhere
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person
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have a
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to pick
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whether do or not.
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, in my opinion, about
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should
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the law about
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childhood
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vaccination
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,
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, affecting the ratio reduces tremendously.
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