Some of today’s schools insist that all students have their own laptop computer in class to assist in their education. Do you feel that this would be an advantage to students’ education or would it be an unnecessary complication?

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Technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds in all fields, especially in education. Today's education system forces that all pupils should have
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personal
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for their study purpose in
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. Some think that
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unnecessary.
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essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons. On the one hand, there are numerous
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in
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for studies because
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the teacher
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teacher
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can explain perfectly
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using innumerable examples, videos and lectures. Student's may be free to
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school with their
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rather than having all
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and materials; high-tech
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can only teach
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modern knowledge and broad ideas,
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good employment in future because our world is fully modernized.
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pupils only bring to their school namely personal
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can give enormous explanation and ides while teacher thaught the
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,
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kind of modern
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can provide a plethora of advantages undoubtedly.
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, using
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gives some drawbacks. One of the major drawbacks is that the
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might be
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computers
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for their personal use rather than
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as surfing the internet, chatting
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friends and playing video games,
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can be interrupted while
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studying
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a multitude
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of time
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while they would be
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affected
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their eyesight power,
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tremendously who are studying the modern and high-tech
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,
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tendency might be given adverse effect on
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. In conclusion, having a
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in
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provides numerous benefits
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as understanding
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thoroughly
with the tutor
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guidance
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and enhancing the
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wisdom; affecting eyesight power and
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concentrate
missing while in
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classroom
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is the drawbacks of
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trend.
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, I think using a
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in
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has countless advantages
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learners
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