Buying things on the internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Researchers show that in
this
day and age most shopping is done online. There are many reasons why many
people
prefer to shop online rather than in stores. In
this
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I will discuss both the advantages and
disadvantages
of online shopping and give my opinion.
People
find shopping online a
lot
more convenient with a
lot
less effort.
Although
online shopping seems very simple and easy, there are a
lot
of problems
people
face very often when shopping online. The most known problem with online shopping is fraud.There are many cases of cybercrime where customers' debit or credit card details are misused to make fraudulent transactions.
This
has resulted in many
people
losing a
lot
of money that they can never get back. Another very common problem
people
have when shopping online is delays in delivery. When ordering a
product
online there is a 14-30% chance that the
product
will arrive late.
People
also
have an understanding of the way a
product
looks in person. When buying something online, most companies make the
product
look as good as possible for more purchases.
This
results in many customers being unsatisfied with the
product
they have bought.
Although
online shopping may come with many
disadvantages
, there are
also
many benefits to online shopping.
For example
, If you would like a
product
that is
not in your area, there is a good chance you will be able to find the
product
online. Online shopping
also
saves
people
a
lot
of time. Online shopping is convenient for those who cannot find time out of their day to go buy what they want. Online shopping
also
gives you a
lot
more options.
For example
, if you go to a
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store in your local area, they would probably only have a limited amount of shoes, but when shopping online, you would most likely find other options that you may want to purchase
instead
. In conclusion, There are many benefits of online shopping
however
there are many
disadvantages
and
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believe that these advantages outweigh the
disadvantages
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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