You have been invited to a networking conference for your field of work. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter: Describe the invitation you received and why it is important to you Explain why the conference would be beneficial for you and the company Ask for the company for time off to attend and to cover some of the travel costs.

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Dear Mr Dav. I am writing to let you know that I have been invited to a networking conference that will discuss new

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procedures for liquid ammonia production. Let me describe why I have been invited.

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week, I sent an E-mail to an international company specialized in selling

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products asking for some

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gear

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our staff. They prepared our order,

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, they offered me an invitation to attend a conference that will discuss new

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procedures for

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work environment. I believe that

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conference would be beneficial to me because it could scale up my

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-related knowledge and experience. It would positively impact our company since I will be able to apply the newest

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protocols in our plant. I would kindly ask you to accept my four

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leave so that I can attend the meeting. I would

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be thankful if the company issued a travel allowance for me. I appreciate your consideration in

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matter. Best regards, Jay

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Task response

Provide a clear and direct response to the task at hand, addressing all key points in the prompt.

Coherence & Cohesion

Ensure a consistent and appropriate use of formal language throughout the letter, and consider using a more professional greeting and closing.

Lexical resource

Expand the range of vocabulary used, including more specific and technical terms related to safety and ammonia production.

Grammatical range

Work on using a wider variety of complex sentence structures and check for subject-verb agreement and pronoun usage.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

167 words

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