You have been invited to a networking conference for your field of work. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter: Describe the invitation you received and why it is important to you Explain why the conference would be beneficial for you and the company Ask for the company for time off to attend and to cover some of the travel costs.
Dear Mr Dav.
I am writing to let you know that I have been invited to a networking conference that will discuss new
safety
procedures for liquid ammonia production.
Let me describe why I have been invited. Last
week, I sent an E-mail to an international company specialized in selling safety
products asking for some safety
gear to
our staff. They prepared our order, Change preposition
for
in addition
, they offered me an invitation to attend a conference that will discuss new safety
procedures for safer
work environment. I believe that Add an article
the safer
a safer
this
conference would be beneficial to me because it could scale up my safety
-related knowledge and experience. It would positively impact our company since I will be able to apply the newest safety
protocols in our plant.
I would kindly ask you to accept my four days
leave so that I can attend the meeting. I would Change noun form
days'
also
be thankful if the company issued a travel allowance for me.
I appreciate your consideration in this
matter.
Best regards,
JaySubmitted by aymanshabakaa on
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