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Some parents want their children to read-only educational books and consider entertaining books a waste of time. Do you agree with their opinion? Why?

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The benefits of reading in childhood cannot be denied.
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, some people suggest that
children
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 should only read
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 that educate them, and they discourage reading for entertainment, claiming that
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 readings do not have value. I disagree with
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 an extreme view and think that
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 should help their offspring find the right balance between different genres of
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. So-called “entertaining
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” that are read for pleasure enable
children
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 to develop in different ways than they do with the educational report.
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books
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 help
children
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 experience situations they have not encountered in real life,
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 teaching them essential human values.
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,
children
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 can learn the meaning of true friendship and loyalty early on through reading
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. Most importantly, these are entertainment
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 that help
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 fall in love with reading and make them more willing to read serious
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 as well.
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 I strongly disagree with the idea that youngsters should not be allowed to read
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 for pleasure, I see why some
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 may have
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 negative attitude towards some
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.
Books
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 about frivolous subjects might make one think they can teach nothing. Not surprisingly, some
parents
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 would not want their
children
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 to spend time reading them. Another problem may arise if
children
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 spend all of their time reading
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 for fun
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 of developing themselves by choosing
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 that could help them learn specific skills or gain knowledge that may help them later in their professional lives.
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, there are not many reasons for
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 to forbid the reading of entertaining
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 altogether.
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,
parents
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 should recommend
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 to their
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 to help them develop a taste for enriching and quality writing. In conclusion, I strongly disagree with the statement that all entertaining
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 are useless for
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, as I believe they are necessary for developing various human values and love for reading.
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, I do acknowledge that some
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 may have less educational value, and
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parents
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 should attempt to influence the kind of
books
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 that their offspring read.
Submitted by Musaib ul hassan on

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