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The supplied chart illustrates the trends of shares measured by euros from a specific company called Outokumpu during a determined period, from 2006 to 2010. Overall, we can see the largest fluctuation over the five years given.
Moreover
, it's clearly evident that there was a season of high prices ,in the beginning, followed by a considerable decay and
then
 a modest recovery.
To begin
 with, in 2006, the company shares rapidly increased their values from 10E to more than 30 in a short slam of one year, reaching the highest number.
However
, from the beginning of 2007 to the middle of 2008, Outokumpu share prices showed a slight decrease at 10E, approximately.
Thus
, there was a modest fluctuation, followed by a sharply climb to the same value as 2007.
Nevertheless
, in the
first
 semester of 2008, the share price dramatically dropped from the lowest value illustrated in the line graph, at more or less 7 euros. After a few months of 2009, it presented a little increase at 8e. In the following months, shares steadily fluctuated between 11 and 18 euros, approximately, having a peak in the
first
 semester of 2010.
Finally
, it decreased again less than the started number.
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