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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this cause? What can be done about this problem?

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Nowadays, there are still a lot of
people
 starving.
This
 does not mean that those countries
don’t
 have enough
food
.
Then
, why there are many
people
 around the world still going hungry.
This
 essay will discuss the reason and solution to
this
 problem.
First
, the most notable reason is that even though countries have the advances made in agriculture, some poor families do not have many to buy it. In many countries, there are still a lot of slums in places that
people
don’t
 know. These
people
 live in a dirty place without good care, or
money
 to afford their
food
. They
don’t
 have a healthy body for finding jobs or even cannot go to school. Do not have a good education and strong body they can’t earn
money
 by themselves.
As a result
, even though there is a lot of
food
 in the market they still can fill their stomach. To solve
this
 problem,
people
 can donate some
money
 to those
people
 who are in need. Today, rich families have too many resources held in their hands, the gap between poor and rich is huge. If we
don’t
 solve
this
 problem, there will still have lots of
people
 starving and suffering from illness.
People
 can donate
money
 to charities or other organizations so that they can buy
food
 or resources for slum places.
Furthermore
, the government can give some support to those places
such
 as teaching them words or giving them jobs so that they can afford their
food
 by themselves. In conclusion, the biggest reason is the gap between the poor and the rich while the solution is donating
money
 to those
people
 or teaching them some skills that they can earn
money
 by themselves.
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