The popularity of tourism is increasing day by day. There are many benefits of tourism, but it also creates some problems. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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increasing

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and for that has lots of advantages but

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creating some drawbacks.

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to analyse the situation and

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their

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are now available and

also

the foreign

people

came

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this

tourism

place

.

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place

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local

people

are benefitted to sell something and their work increasing for

tourism

.

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profit

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tourism

.

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Tourist

place

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are heavily developing. That's why when there

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tourist

spot

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that

place

must be developed.

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place

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decorated hotel or motel where

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the traveller

a traveller

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traveller

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travellers

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can stay for that that

place

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different

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building

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and the local

People

can get different types

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.

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foreign

traveller

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travellers

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increasing our currency by travelling. Opposite

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opinion

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against that, If there have lots of benefits but some drawbacks are remains here. As like

tourist

place

now increasing crime a lot. The traveller sometimes

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the pick

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.

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this

reason

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the foreigner

also

face

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same problem and damage the reputation of

this

country.

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so much harmful for

people

and

this

place

.The government should take

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step

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for that.

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government manage

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tourist

police strictly and

people

should take care of themselves. To sum up,

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last

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least because

people

always do

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travelling for reducing

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their

robotic life. If drawbacks are applicable but

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is more than by

tourism

.