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These days, cell (mobile) phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no doubt that these days social communication methods changed with having cell phones and the
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 development has a visible downside in the all over community and which is the lack of conversation
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 believe that sending one or two letters in a day is sufficient.
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, when the persons react with families or friends per day via the mobiles or the
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, they may lose the sense of gathering together in one place and having
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, mobiles phones and the
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social communication.
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,
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 can stay in touch with those who live abroad for the purpose of studying or working.
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, parents are calling to their kids who are studying
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abroad nearly daily by using many
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mobile's applications
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 ToTok, Botim, Skype.
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, lovers can communicate throughout the day with their loved ones by sending a love message or other things; it can not
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 to the past when the lovers could only contact each other once or twice at most.
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,
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 lack seeing each other and have conversation
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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