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Some people believe that technology has made man more sociable, and others think that it has made us less sociable. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Technology
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 has gained height in the
last
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 decade. Some
people
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 feel that
technology
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 has helped in developing their communication skills, while others might argue that it has made them more anti-social. I strongly agree that technological advancement has greatly improved
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social behaviour within a community. Some
people
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, on the one hand, feel that, with the help of
technology
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, they have been able to interact with others in a better way.
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 is because
of
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social platforms
such
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 as Facebook provide good tools for the population to socialise in their free time.
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, there is
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video
options
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 available where
people
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 are allowed to make video calls in foreign countries.
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, distant relatives are able to see each other and sharing
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ideas become easier. In these interactive
softwares
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software
, man
develop
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 their communication styles and feel more confident about themselves.
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,
this
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 has increased their potential of communicating with others in a positive way.
On the other hand
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, we do have some
people
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 who believe that these innovations have made their social life worse.
People
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 tend to spend more time on their
laptop
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 surfing or playing video games virtually
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 of interacting with real
people
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.
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, when they meet new
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, they are less willing to start a conversation and prefer to stick to their mobile
phone
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phones
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.
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, they find it difficult to have a physical face-to-face discussion as they are not used to these situations. In conclusion,
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technology
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 has both its benefits and drawbacks
about
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 socialisation.
However
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, I believe that if
technology
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 is used in the correct way, it increases the social character of any
individuals
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individual
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social interaction
  • connect
  • communicate
  • video conferencing
  • stay in touch
  • online communities
  • forums
  • like-minded individuals
  • global communication
  • collaboration
  • access to information
  • knowledge
  • bridge the gap
  • social isolation
  • detachment
  • face-to-face communication
  • genuine human connection
  • maintain
  • real-life interactions
  • balance
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