Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.

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There are some individuals who would argue that the number of
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has risen so much in the
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50 years and
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trend has a detrimental effect on local communities and the environment. Other people think that
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is beneficial for economic reasons.
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with, I am of the belief that travelling is playing a pivotal role for many countries`
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. Nations like
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, which is my country, depends on that and 25% of its income are from travellers. Without
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many citizens, especially on islands and waterfront areas, would be live in poverty. Apart from that,
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tendance is conducive to many folks in order to find a seasonal job. For illustration, the majority of young adults in
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work in the summer as waiters or waitresses for a living.
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, tourism has two predominant effects.
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and foremost on
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. Never before have we seen so much pollution caused by people in order to visit another country. A clear illustration of
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could be said to be that recent research from environmentalists in
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has shown that a 50% of the
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in
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pollute our beaches and forests because they leave their trashes there. Another distinct disadvantage of travelling is that impairs the local societies.
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, in ,Zante many
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get drunk and make damage to local shops and citizens` cars. So, I believe that
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rampant trend can be mitigated if tourist
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their habits and
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governments contribute to
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.
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, ministries could promote eco-tourism. To sum up, in my point of view
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should not be decreased in order to tackle these problems. I think that only by the concerted effort of governments and
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can
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issue be eliminated.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • negative impact
  • local inhabitants
  • economy
  • boosts
  • cultural exchange
  • preservation
  • restoration
  • environmental degradation
  • overcrowding
  • strain
  • infrastructure
  • cultural dilution
  • commercialized
  • economic dependence
  • sustainable tourism
  • mitigate
  • adverse effects
  • regulation
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