Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is believed by some
people
that accepting a bad Use synonyms
situation
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such
as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money is the best, while others disagree and prefer to try and improve Linking Words
such
situations Linking Words
instead
of letting it go. In my opinion, I am agreed with the latter view as I think at least trying to improve something, even if the Linking Words
result
will not be changed, tends to make a person feel better. In the following paragraphs, both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.
On the Use synonyms
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hand, it can be argued that staying in an unpleasant Use synonyms
situation
may allow Use synonyms
people
to avoid risks. Use synonyms
This
is because some terrible changes might be created if they decide to make any Linking Words
further
interaction. Linking Words
In addition
to the changes, they can worsen the atmosphere and lead that person to lose what they have. To illustrate Linking Words
this
, there was a news Linking Words
that
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report
about a middle-aged man who was laid off from his work due to the Covid-19 pandemic and decided to use his Change the verb form
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lump of money in setting up a small business, a drinks shop. Linking Words
As a
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result
, the Use synonyms
situation
became worse as he was not able to earn Use synonyms
profit
. At the same time, he lost his Correct article usage
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lump of money. Linking Words
However
, I disagree with Linking Words
this
idea because Linking Words
people
can become depressed if they are surrounded Use synonyms
with
too intense situations.
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On the other hand
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is
a lot more positive effects for those who try to improve a Change the verb form
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situation
. I always believe that trying to change a bad Use synonyms
situation
, whether the Use synonyms
result
will turn out as a good Use synonyms
one
or not, will never hurt anyone. Use synonyms
On the contrary
, it gives Linking Words
people
the feeling of Use synonyms
proud
as they at least tried to do something. Replace the word
pride
For instance
, Linking Words
one
of my friends failed in physics’ exam, but Use synonyms
instead
of accepting her Linking Words
result
and sitting with Use synonyms
this
failure, she walked to the teacher and asked him to check her paper again. Surprisingly, the teacher made a mistake in checking her paper. He accidentally skipped Linking Words
one
question in the answer sheet. Use synonyms
Thus
, the whole answer sheet was ruined. Linking Words
This
example shows that trying is much better than staying still.
In conclusion, Linking Words
although
those who play safe by accepting the terrible situations they are facing might be able to avoid risks, I believe it is best to put effort and give the best for an improvement while there is still a chance to stand up and take an action.Linking Words
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