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Some people think that teachers should be able to ask distruptive children to leave the class. Do you think it is the best way to deal with distruptive children in the classroom? What other solutions are there?

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The opinion is divided as to whether or not students with disturbing characters be excused out of the lecture hall as a way of discipline. while some argue that
this
 is the most effective measure of achieving orderliness in classrooms, I believe that there are other ways of addressing and cubbing indiscipline at school which are constructive. There is no denying the fact that serving disciplinary measures for inappropriate conduct is necessary for enhancing learning in schools.
However
, excusing the pupil out of the teaching room due to an offence committed might not be the best option for correcting wrongdoings.
For example
, some pupils are not interested in curricular activities and oftentimes will deliberately want to get punished as a means to evade lectures if
this
 method is incorporated.
Moreover
 skipping classes will make learners lose out on various topics and subjects taught, thereby leading to poor performance levels in academics. Considering the negative impact of the approach above, other constructive measures to punish unruly behaviours in classrooms should be encouraged.
Firstly
, the teacher could offer to withhold or reduce the break period of defaulting students. In
this
 way, they are made to seat out the whole period of teaching,
therefore
 reducing playing time and mingling with friends during breaks serving as a deterrent.
Furthermore
, punishment like making the pupil clean the classroom after the entire teaching due to misconduct can be incorporated.
For instance
, giving the pupil extra labour picking dirt's from the floor of the lecture room serve as positive punishment as they are unlikely to miss out on important lectures after committing an offence that will not affect their grades in the long run. In conclusion, beneficial punishment is an important consideration when correcting learners in other not to affect academics, in
this
 regard sending a student out of the teaching room for bad behaviour should not be encouraged.
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