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Children today spend more time watching television rather than they did in the past. Describe some of the Advantages and Disadvantages of Television for the children

#children #time #television
In the state-of-the-art society,
children
 prefer using their
time
 to watch various things through digital devices,
such
 as a mobile phone or a
television
, to what they did when they were young.
This
 action is related to most
of
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children
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the children
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 and can make plenty of
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affects
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effects
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in
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on
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 all their
process
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processes
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 of development.
Therefore
, the advantage and disadvantages of watching
television
 should be planned and managed by their parents as soon as possible. On the one hand,
television
give
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 more useful
information
 to be approached with a variety of specific fields in a short
time
.
For example
, some
information
 is about the situation of
COVID-19
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the COVID-19
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 pandemic and modern technologies researched all over the world.
Children
 can read and make conversations
this
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information
 via various platforms like Facebook or
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Twitter
 with people to widen their knowledge and state their opinion. As a
results
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, the young can improve their horizons about essential areas which helps them to build their own relationships,
besides
to
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making new friends around the world.
On the other hand
, if
children
 watch
many
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 poor
information
 on
television
which
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it
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 makes them waste their
time
 and get too much useless
information
 to receive other important things.
For instance
, useless
information
,
such
 as
contents
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the contents
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 of cartoons or uneducation videos, makes
children
 easily become lazy and not positive in front of hectic circumstances. According to
this
tend
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trend
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, the young will be passive and must spend more
time
 to conduct their goals when they need. In conclusion,
children
 should watch
information
 through smart devices with
right
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 choices.
This
mean
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 selecting
of
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essential
contents
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 and having clear
information
 when they watch
television
 because it has both advantages and disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational programs
  • diverse cultures
  • entertainment options
  • language skills
  • critical thinking
  • social awareness
  • shared experience
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • inappropriate content
  • academic performance
  • attention problems
  • social skills
  • commercial influence
  • addiction
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