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Some people believe that it us best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or storage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, there are two types of reactions when
people
 face a bad
situation
such
 as having a bad job or storage of money. The
first
 type is to accept them while the
second
 type is to try and improve
this
situation
.
This
 essay discusses both sides and will give my own opinion.
First
 of all, some
people
 think that it is the best way to accept the bad
situation
, while
this
 way has some negative impact. The most notable impact is stress. If
people
 are always in a bad
situation
 for a long time their minds will not be stable,
such
 as having in bad mood, angry easily or even will get some mental sick. It is a bad habit that
people
 accept all things without trying to
change
this
situation
.
Therefore
, other
people
 hold that it is better to try and improve
such
 bad situations. It is true that
this
 is a positive thought, and because
people
 have tried it to
change
 their
situation
, they won't feel regret. Even though sometimes it may not
change
 a lot whereas
people
 have tried to improve their life, they will feel satisfied.
As a result
, they will be more easily accepting of their
situation
.
Furthermore
, if
people
 don’t try to improve the
situation
, the bad
situation
 will never
change
.
People
 can try to do something that might
change
 the
situation
.
For example
,
people
 who are unsatisfactory to the job can try to talk with the manager and ask to
change
 their position or ask some suggest solving these problems. In conclusion, I think that
people
 should try to improve their bad situations rather than just accept them and do nothing. Due to having some action to
change
 the
situation
people
 will be satisfied and might have a chance to
change
 their
situation
. If
people
 don’t do anything the
situation
 will not be changed.
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