Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other type of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and and give your own opinion.

Many people in leadership believe that economic development should be the most crucial goal, while others argue that there are

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other things as important as

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for a nation. In my opinion, I believe that if a country is rich, is the result of other factors. Of ,course it is vital for the operation and prosperity of a country, but

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achievement came from the profound development of education. A clear illustration of

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could be said to be, recent research by leading professors at a university in Greece has shown that countries with

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proportion of educated

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have higher possibilities to increase their GDP growth.

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is because master degrees or PhDs have the tendency to create many innovative

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start

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up

companies

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which

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have a pivotal role

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economic development.

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,

companies

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like Apple and Microsoft

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up from the ideas of two brilliant people, Steve Jobs and Bill Gates respectively.

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multinational

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nowadays lead the world`s technological features and the economy as well. Apart from that, they are

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mutual

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beneficial

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both for the USA and the

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, because they

are offer

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many career prospects and they are

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billions of dollars every year in taxes.

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, many countries like China or India do not pay attention

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the quality of their citizen`s life. They are progressing all these years due to the cheap workforce they offer to multinational

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. As nations, may have huge economic power and dominate the world in many aspects

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the vast majority of their

citizens

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are unhappy on a variety of grounds like poverty and

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educational system. To sum up, I have the belief that the priority of a country should be its

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and how to improve the quality of life.

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will have

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the prosperity of society.