Education is one of the single most important factors in the development of a country. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is an often argued issue whether

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education

is a single crucial aspect for improving

nations

or not by many debates and TV shows.

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plays a crucial part

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develop

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the

nations

undoubtedly,

however

, there are some other factors

also

contains for developing states

such

as science and technology,

therefore

, I strongly disagree with

this

statement for the following reasons. To commence with, information is not

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aspect of improving states because there are a multitude of components

also

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namely science and technology. When a

state

has plenty of ultra-modern medical and research

breakthrough

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while

this

particular nation will consider

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developed

nations

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,

therefore

, these aspects

also

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the most vital components for

improvement

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of a

state

.

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,

in

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Japan has a minimum amount of scholars and information

level

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,

in contrast

,

this

country is considered a development territory due to the

technology

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breakthrough.

Hence

, discipline is not a single reason for a developed

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province.

Furthermore

, some

nations

still now do not have

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better

education

amenities, but they develop

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another way like

tourism

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industry.

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kind of sector earns a million amount of dollars to

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to their

nations

rather than

education

.

For instance

,

in

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Vietnam earns one million dollars

in

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every year

by

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tourism

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sectors

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,

although

,

this

country learning level is not improved and they give full attention to attract the tourist who international explorer.

As a result

, learning is not a single aspect for developing a

state

and there are a plethora of elements contained. To conclude, discipline is the most predicament

factors

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for every nation, but

this

is not a single reason for

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developing

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a province because there are innumerable elements are contained to improve a

state

.

Therefore

, I strongly agree with

this

statement in the above-mentioned details and I hope

this

process is conducive to building a healthy and wealthy society around the world.