Some people say that all secondary school students should be taught how to manage money as it is important life skill

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According to some individuals,
wealth
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a wealth
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of
as
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person plays an indispensable role in their
life
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and how to spend
money
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according to their needs .therfore,it
have
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to be taught in children's academic
life
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.According to my perception,
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I am
in the favour of
this
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phenomenon.
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with, undoubtedly,just as time
management
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is necessary
in
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for
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everyone's
life
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,
money
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management
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is
also
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crucial.The reason behind
this
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that
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is that
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individuals expend their
money
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on some bad activities because they do not know how to invest
on
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in
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unnecessary things
such
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as
kasino
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casino
games .
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,according to a survey by Oxford University,it can be seen that many
business
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businessman
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man
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men
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spends their
money
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on
such
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games and they get failed by their bad luck .
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, they
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their all profits .So ,it should important to teach students
money
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management
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in secondary schools.
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, budget plays a vital role in people's
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life
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as
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where they spend on them.It is true that
one time
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investment in
a
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apply
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good things
work
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works
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as
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in
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a
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long term.If learners train about how to manage
money
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,it will give them
fruitfull
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fruitful
outcomes and change their living standard.
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, if a person
save
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their
money
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as Fd or
by
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in
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any other way .it will help him in future problems. To conclude,
although
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students learn many subjects and skills in schools ,but
money
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management
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skills are
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usefull
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useful
for them through
one time
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investment and save
money
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. And it
have
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great
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a great
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impact on individuals lifestyle.
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